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Jones stormed out of his boss’s
office slamming the door so violently that it shook the windows all the way up
to the third floor.
(Do you see the anger?)
He had never been so happy.
Winning the lottery had set him free.
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“Showing is
slowing and can lead to rough going if the reader doesn’t see what the author intended there to be.”
Vince Mooney
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